An unexpected visitor

An unexpected visitor

For our writing we needed to make a doc called an s.u.w. It is where you write amazing storeys. Here is one of the best stories please enjoy! 

An unexpected visitor

Once upon a time in a far away land there lived a cute little fairy called Ellie. She had lived in her mushroom for over 50 years. She was born here in mushroom land she had her first steps here she went to school here and worked in the fields here all her adult life. Mushroom land was safe and nothing unexpected ever happened.  Each and every day her neighbours would attend their normal day jobs in an ordinary way. Every morning she would sit at her table tucking into a plate of steaming hot butterfly mushrooms on toast. Watching the ordinary world go by in its ordinary way. This morning seemed no different … until she peeked out of her window. The sight that had meet her eyes was not acceptable or ordinary at all. There was an unexpected visitor that had arrived. The visitor had grey and pink hair. She was a very unexpected character to enter mushroom land. Her personality was whack she acted like a rock star I wonder if she is and she is here to put on a show for us no one has ever done that before. Her name was Livi Larmonico she was putting up flyers about her show i'm definitely going to go. Livi was a total  rock star she was so pretty and talented “I can't wait to see her perform” shouted Ellie. So Ellie got really ready for the show and soon enough it was the night of the concert Livi was getting ready for her big show. The crowd were roaring their hearts out. But suddenly a spark came from the dj's control board it lit the stage on fire the whole entire crowd screamed in fear they all ran away except one… Livi was trap there was fire surrounding her. Ellie stopped when she heard Livi screaming ”help, someone please help me”. Ellie had to think fast she filled 3 buckets full of water she tried to throw them at the fire but instead she soaked Livi in water. She  tried again and this time she actually got the fire she made a little space for Livi to get out. They ran away from mushroom land and watched it all disappear soon enough mushroom land was just ashes, ashes lying on the ground. Mushroom land was gone no one ever stepped foot in mushroom land again.

Have you ever had an unexpected visitor visit your home ?