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Wednesday, September 1, 2021

A Potion Of Happiness

 Writing week 6 

For writing this week we are working on poems we either had to create a Haiku, Rhymed, Riddle or shape poem. I chose to do the rhymed one, if you did end up choosing to write a rhymed poem you had to write it about a potion so a lucky potion, wicked potion or a friendship one etc. I wrote about a happiness potion.

Here is my poem:


Have you ever wrote a rhyming poem?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Caoimhe, what a great way for me to start my week by reading your happiness poem, however I'm not sure I actually want to try it anytime soon sorry! Your use of rhyme was very clever! You mentioned 'a sprinkle of positive mindset'. I think this is a quote that I will use with students in the future when perhaps they are facing a challenge. It has a very friendly vibe to it - tu meke! Always remember to double check your spelling and grammar before you hit publish. How about trying another form of Poetry just for fun?
    Madam Judd

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