Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, September 1, 2021
A Potion Of Happiness
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Hi Caoimhe, what a great way for me to start my week by reading your happiness poem, however I'm not sure I actually want to try it anytime soon sorry! Your use of rhyme was very clever! You mentioned 'a sprinkle of positive mindset'. I think this is a quote that I will use with students in the future when perhaps they are facing a challenge. It has a very friendly vibe to it - tu meke! Always remember to double check your spelling and grammar before you hit publish. How about trying another form of Poetry just for fun?
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