Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, June 12, 2020
About Me
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Caoimhe,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning from today. I am so impressed with the detail you have written about your learning process. It is truly a quality blog post. You have also done a wonderful job of justifying why you would and wouldn't share things. Ka pai on your mahi!
Something that could make your profile poster even better would be taking out the instructions like 'Add a photo of yourself' and just having things in answer form.
Would it be ok for me to use your blog as an example to others? I would love to because it is pretty great.
Keep up the great blogging
:) Sharon - Te Ara TÅ«hura Education Programme Leader
Hello Sharon
DeleteThank you so much for all the feedback, I really appreciate it and will work on that next time. Yes you can definitely use this as an example for other's.
:) Caoimhe
Thank you for letting me use it. It is a really great blog post. Keep up the wonderful blogging.
DeleteHi Caoimhe.
ReplyDeleteI am very impressed with your blog post about public and private information. You have a very good idea about this. It is so important that people understand what is and isn't appropriate to share publicly. I am going to ask my own children if they understand about what is and isn't Ok to share publicly. I have worked with Sharon and Mark and I find them very helpful as well.